Thursday, 14 April 2016

WALT: Retell a past event

WILF: Correct sequence of events.

“No school work today we're cooking” Miss Wihongi
Shouted happily. Yes!! I thought to myself. I Love
apple crumble. ”Shickane” Miss called. I ran to the back
Of the class and stuck the light blue gloves on. I snatched a red
sharp potato peeler from the stack. I held my juicy apple in my other
hand. I started to peel. Finally, all the skin is off. I chopped it in half,
then into quarters, then into thin slices. I throw my load of apples
into the huge pot. Its ready to strew . Off to the staffroom we sprint.
I mixed sugar and Butter then flour. It looked like stuffing. sifted this
on top of the stewed apples. I shoved it into the burning oven. It
smelt like buttery puff popcorn. I glazed into the oven, the bubbles
reminded me of Ngawha Spring. It's ready whanau. Haere Mai ki te kai.” Miss Wihongi” yelled. I spirited to snatch a colourful bowl and waited for everyone else. I slowly scooped a massive mouthful. Solid I thought. What a mean day.

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